People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Our elders always says " Never make promise when you are very happy and never break promise when your too sad".

Humans have significant abilities to analyze,understand and evaluate any type of discussions.Generally, I believe in order to evaluate at any decision a self-analysis of whether that decision is acceptable or not. In case if there an extreme complex condition where we are unable to analyse any issue/topic, we should have brainstorming with out go-to concern person.This surely helps you to get a different prospective other than what you have.
Analyzing the issue/topic will surely helps you to understand the seriousness of it and get a deeper insight of what it is actually worth it.And based on the understanding of analysis, decision would be strong and justified with proper understanding.

There are some strategies we need to apply while considering any issue for making decision. Those strategies are:
1. Always brainstorm with people related to issue and get their insights.
2. Always believe what you see and most importantly what you cannot see and hold a strong belief in it.
3. Analyze the pros and cons of the issue.
4. Analyze the short-term and long-term effects of the issue.
And many more...
This definitely gets some insight to evaluate & make a valuable decision.

Therefore, I believe any decision based on emotion would proved to be poor decision.Because of the fact that the emotion plays different roles in our life.Some emotions can be used to appease someone in order to get favor and some people could fake emotions. So its very difficult to understand the logic behind the person who's emotions we are judging. And then justifying those decision with logic is same as giving self-satisfaction but in reality it fails precisely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19243986254 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14754720173 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0421547165 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252301778361 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737848332305 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824431607018 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772510011144 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949895129108 0.0667264976115 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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