People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The claim that the decisions based on emotions and then justified with logic afterwards indicate a poor decision making capability of an individual, is a little overstated and may not be an accurate perception of the conjectures of the impact of emotional decision-making made by the individual.M ost of the time, emotions define decisions and consequently accelerate decision-making capabilities of a person or a group of individuals.
Many great revolutions and wars have started and ended as a result of an emotional response to a situation. By the word "emotions", one obviously does refer to feelings, wether they are of love, hatred or fear. An endless list of feelings can be created which have been defined by the term emotion.For instance, the ocurrence of the Holocaust was a result of an emotional fear in Hitler and the Nazis towards the gypsys, Jews , homosexuals and many other castes. These castes were considered as a threat to the Nazis (by the Nazis). During the war, many countries served as ally to these castes and tried to fight Hitler and Nazis. This obliquely directs towards the emotional responses of the other ally countries towards the suffering of the petty families and individuals in Europe. Thus, the various feelings of groups of individuals and some individuals alone, are a part of the decisions they make in order to perform an action.
A more common example of emotional decision-making is of Abraham Lincoln, a former president of the United States, who took various remarkable steps in order to abolish slavery, Clearly, the main reason behind his efforts was that it was not acceptable in a humane society to see people within the same country being treated as slaves.
However, Sometimes emotions may cloud an individuals decision-making, such as in the corporate world, a reputed CEO of a multinational company cannot just make decision because he feels petty towards some issues or feels highly greatful about others. Although considering the fact that a decision must be taken by taking into account all the pros and cons, it is surely a part of an emotional and logical response.
In the end, a shrewd individual or a group of individuals use both emotion and logic in order to obtain the best outcome of a decision. Logical and emotional decision making benefits both the society and the individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07969151671 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07001360965 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537275064267 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.595812649 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9230769231 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265958447231 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861883792801 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860419206441 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157745321246 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844994569046 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.8971910112 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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