People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
While some may argue that best decisions are based on logic, sometimes emotion-based decisions are better. If a person only
decide based on logic in every situation and do not pay attention to his emotion the chances are high to make a poor-one-dimensional decision. For example, upon marriage, if a person only choose a person to marry with only based on logic such as his family background and level of education, after marriage he may found that he does not love his wife even if she is logically a good girl. There are many other examples of this kind such as choosing the major of study and the job. In these situations, in contrast to the statement, if people make decisions only based on logic, they cannot justify them with emotion afterwards, and therefore, they are poor decision makers. It is important to mention that, people should consider their decisions as a multidimensional fact. They cannot only consider logic or emotion. Instead, they should consider both aspects and probable consequences, and then, make a wise decision. For example, in choosing my major for university, I chose my major based on its future job and did not pay attention that if I am interested in. After graduation, I could not find a job since I did not like my major and I did not have enough motivation to be a good student and my resume was not powerful.
If emotion-based decisions are justifiable by logic, they are powerful decisions. When people make any decision, they should try to check it from other aspects, too. For example, upon choosing a job, if a person chooses photography because he loves it, and try to justify it through logic for his family and says I love this job so I have enough motivation to progress and become successful, he is not a poor decision maker.
However, sometimes some decisions are not justifiable. If a person decide to sucide, then there is no justification for his decision, and he would be a poor decision maker.
In sum, from what discussed above, we can conclude that people who make decisions based on emotion are not necessarily poor decision makers. It depends on the situation and people should consider all aspects to make a wise decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79155672823 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895917648 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456464379947 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8986579059 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430724516919 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164638834148 0.0831039109588 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160470816646 0.0758088955206 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298576966778 0.150359130593 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747473667078 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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