The following issue are relate with deliberately crime and its impact on social contract negatively. its also suggest that who commits with crime, should not take any social right even what the crime maker earn by crime because its not his property instead of social property. This issue argue that ones should take the social right who take care of it. I strongly support the issue because of the following reasons.
First and formost, society based on its individuals responsibility to the society . if any one gainsay it , additionally doing opposite of benign for the society looks like deceptive and malevolent for the society . every individuals society have some individuals traditions rules. everybody should obey the rules instead of disobey . for instance, a indigenous society enigma are unknown to an artful society like citys. everybody should khow the rules and obey the rules because of maintain a vulnerable position to emancipation from disorder. This is how society ignore crime to sustainable development.
Secondly , the society anticipate children behaviour by controlling crime . If any society are provoking crime instead of of controlled. its had gone to hell because of young genaration people are learning from it that crime is a very generous things . by controlling crime, our society play as placable for living and showing benediction for life . crime and honesty can not juxtaposition along. everybody should take care of it
Thirdly ,if every society can maintain its crime , its zealot for knowledge and development by assiduous work . every society should fulfillment to sociial right only for the people who are work for it beneficently. that will provoke people for work for social development instead of crime.
finally every body should conscious about the social rules and maintain it . this is how we come into peace and avoid crime .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278287461774 0.240241500013 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.125382262997 0.157235817809 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0672782874618 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0581039755352 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0519877675841 0.0444667217837 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140672782875 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0275229357798 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77466050084 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0183486238532 0.030933414821 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0886850152905 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0305810397554 0.0249443105267 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0214067278287 0.0148568991511 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1901.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 310.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13225806452 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38064516129 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28064516129 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174193548387 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125806451613 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77466050084 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 219.290929204 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48064516129 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 47.7290718165 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7619047619 23.380412469 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8279627787 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 141.124799967 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 23.380412469 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.21349557522 844% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.8264208909 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.8961038961 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264146077087 0.391690518653 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114879986283 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890258018107 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50576728233 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121714065639 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101383982776 0.161403998019 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590316612992 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26958844381 0.385218514788 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974877138267 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171220306564 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630093249619 0.0653680567796 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.