Rituals and ceremonies help to define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are.
A particular group of people live in the certain area and share some common values , customs , norms and celebrate a similar types of the festivals and the ceremonies. These types of commonness represent a particular type of the culture. In my perspective without them trhe people of that society will not have unique identity among the people of other places.
At first, when we look back towards the history of America, there was native American who had tightly clinged together with their rituals and ceremonies instead of being frightened by the European who had been ruled over them for certain period . Because of this reason we were able to know about the native American tribe and they are able to maintain their own identity in the whole world till now. If they do not have their own set of culture which are defined by their common rituals and ceremonies, then they may lost their identity and recognized as a part of the European tribe.
Secondly, we were not unbeknownst of the fact that America is the city of dream of every citizen from every country. Out of them, few had got a chance to go there. However, any citizens from any country wants that their children should learn about their own culture so that their culture will always remain in the hand of their ancestor. It make possible to exist the culture of every society so that their ancestor will be recognized their self and know from where they came from. When I used to be in grade 5, I no that the brother near to my house had a chance to go to us and after 5 years they return back to Nepal with his son and wife so that his son can know about our own culture ans no about the identity of ourselves.
At last, if we do not have our identity then how could we recognize ourselves? What is our identity? From where we came? This is always a mystery for us as well as for the ancestor of ours. Culture are aslso helpful in showing the respect towars the ancestors like the dragon boat dance in cho\ina was celebrated to show the faith towards a great poet so that his identity will be preserved and the ancestor of him was also known by many people.
To recapitulate, rituals and the ceremonies define culture but only these two things are not the whole to define our culture. There are other things like festivals etc that also define our culture and these are the things that definitely define ourselves and able to maintain our identity among the divergent people ofmodern age..
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as for', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213983050847 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.156779661017 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0656779661017 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529661016949 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0911016949153 0.0444667217837 205% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.148305084746 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0275423728814 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30148397153 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275423728814 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103813559322 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169491525424 0.0249443105267 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021186440678 0.0148568991511 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2472.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 447.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53020134228 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275167785235 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20581655481 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123042505593 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0648769574944 0.132149295362 49% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.30148397153 2.79330140395 82% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478747203579 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.5528062389 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8333333333 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2571995366 59.4972553346 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.674092028746 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.21349557522 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.4149888143 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.29577464789 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323881654433 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138481214795 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.125064304611 0.077325440228 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561957025212 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190713304862 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133885296301 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772363358225 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337219900373 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0465990253545 0.0692045440612 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221093104452 0.275328986314 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675065419063 0.0653680567796 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.