Boredom is a very common phenomena in our lives. We like or unlike it always arises in its own ways. The expression of author regarding boredom is somewhat whimsical with my statement because before any great things, it would be in politics, scientific discovery, business planning loss or despair in the sense of boredom would come but they are not due the subject lack of imagination and lack of self-motivation.
Firstly, to replenish or improvement of politics is not possible without rivalries or competition either you exploit your best approach or your best motivation regarding to the work, your rivalries or competitors would thwart you efforts. That’s is why, this game of competition is ultimately fruitful and requires in order to establish a great leader and also a great nation. For instance, in Bangladesh, a great leader name, Bangabondhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahmman, who exploits his best effort and suffered huge inflictions for supporting his countrys independence. On that moment he was determine his position, although somewhat disheveled his goal due to opposite government pressure. Because of his firm determination and goal oriented manner, Bangladesh got its independence and he has been remembered with utmost respect. In this scenarios, it has been clear that, although Sheikh Mujibur was suffering huge pressure, mental distortion and sometimes loss heart but ultimately he prevailed and country prevailed. So, boredom and pressure would be productive if the subject is fully aware of his/her goal.
Secondly, scientific discovery is an indispensable part of our everyday lives. We cannot think of our existence without this or we cannot think to move forward without the help of science. This essence of science is the product of scientist arduous journey and in this journey scientist faces many odds and these odds are not unproductive rather they are helpful to make a big and utilitarian discovery. Once Toams Alba Eddison said, ‘hundreds of mistakes gives me a hundreds of way to do the work’ For example, the discovery of electricity is not a mere and whimsical way, behind this Faraday gave many days, months but he did not lose heart, he was increase his attempt more rigorously than before and finally did it.
However, one would argue that, boredom arises due to lack of motivation and imagination and it will harm the way of development. Although, this statement is atypically right, but in long run and a huge of example in our everyday life experience shows that, boredom is required before getting the fruit of success and then the success will be more meaningful.
In conclusion, to improvement of politics, country independence and major discovery of science, boredom would be a common phenomenon and it arise is not due to the lack of motivation and knowledge rather it is much needed to value ones discovery and reformation in the world.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
Boredom is a very common phenomena in our lives. We like or unlike it alwa...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ITS_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'That is'?
Suggestion: That is
...r competitors would thwart you efforts. That’s is why, this game of competition is ultima...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...rys independence. On that moment he was determine his position, although somewhat disheve...
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Line 2, column 829, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...been remembered with utmost respect. In this scenarios, it has been clear that, alth...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a hundred'
Suggestion: a hundred
...on said, ‘hundreds of mistakes gives me a hundreds of way to do the work’ For example, the...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hundred' or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: a hundred; hundreds
...on said, ‘hundreds of mistakes gives me a hundreds of way to do the work’ For example, the...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hind this Faraday gave many days, months but he did not lose heart, he was increa...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arises'?
Suggestion: arises
...dom would be a common phenomenon and it arise is not due to the lack of motivation an...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ledge rather it is much needed to value ones discovery and reformation in the world....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15531914894 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91750232699 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4047122216 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.529411765 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6470588235 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158800539906 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522300770355 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736988498066 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115359998759 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938805970716 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
Boredom is a very common phenomena in our lives. We like or unlike it alwa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ITS_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'That is'?
Suggestion: That is
...r competitors would thwart you efforts. That’s is why, this game of competition is ultima...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...rys independence. On that moment he was determine his position, although somewhat disheve...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 829, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...been remembered with utmost respect. In this scenarios, it has been clear that, alth...
^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a hundred'
Suggestion: a hundred
...on said, ‘hundreds of mistakes gives me a hundreds of way to do the work’ For example, the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hundred' or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: a hundred; hundreds
...on said, ‘hundreds of mistakes gives me a hundreds of way to do the work’ For example, the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hind this Faraday gave many days, months but he did not lose heart, he was increa...
^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arises'?
Suggestion: arises
...dom would be a common phenomenon and it arise is not due to the lack of motivation an...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ledge rather it is much needed to value ones discovery and reformation in the world....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15531914894 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91750232699 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4047122216 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.529411765 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6470588235 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158800539906 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522300770355 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736988498066 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115359998759 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938805970716 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.