So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.
Road accidents are one of the major causes of loss of life of many people, most often news heard around the globe. As far the as the accidents go, it can happen at anytime but the losses of life or major harm can be avoided merely by using seat belts. The statement of the author claiming the adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts is highly controversial no matter if they are aware of dangers or not. So, i cannot agree with the claim and author seems to have gone so far on stating such claim which is not only extreme but highly dangerous.
The sole purpose of seat belts is to minimize the damage in the case of accidents. No matter how aware of the danger we are, the mishap is bound to happen: no matter how wary we are if the other party is not cautious enough we can end up crashing. Now, we might wonder why it should be legally bound, but the answer is quite common. We tend to go outrageous when we are not bound. Without legalization the carelessness arise which is very dangerous. In our daily lives, there are so many things we do for our own safety what we would not do if it was not illegal not to do so. There are many examples. Overdriving, this is not safe for us. Everybody knows this kills but we would do just that if it was not legally bound. Traffic lights are another examples, no-one would follow traffic light if we were not charged for breaking it.
Same is the case with seat belts, everybody knows that its for their own safety but nobody would put it on unless its bound to. Similar case has happened with my uncle. He is highly prudent man. Very much punctual and lived a simple and plane life. He always used to drive with seat belts on though, it is not illegal not to put on in my area. But one day, he was in hurry and as it would have not made such a big deal with the traffic rules and road was pretty clear he didn't mind to put seat belts on but all of a sudden his car crashed and he was seriously injured a massive head injury. This is a perfect case for why to make it legal to use seat belts no matter how aware an adult is of the dangers involved.
However, there are incidents which leads to seemingly cases of not requiring the use of seat belts, like for short trips and the difficulty that may arise from it but is always best to use the straps as in many cases this small piece of straps is the only thing that hangs between the life and death.
In the nutshell, seat belts has been the ultimate life savior in many cases and most of us tend to neglect using it unless we are legally bound to do so. It is in best interest of all to make it legal irrespective of whether an adult is concerned with the dangers that may lie ahead or not. After all, what harm may it cause but save numerous lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...not only extreme but highly dangerous. The sole purpose of seat belts is to min...
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...ffic rules and road was pretty clear he didnt mind to put seat belts on but all of a ...
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...ss we are legally bound to do so. It is in best interest of all to make it legal irresp...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'after all', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196213425129 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.177280550775 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.07917383821 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0808950086059 0.0497285424764 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0705679862306 0.0444667217837 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115318416523 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.039586919105 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.07655676619 2.79330140395 74% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292598967298 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00172117039587 0.0016655270985 103% => OK
Determiners: 0.0808950086059 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025817555938 0.0249443105267 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0240963855422 0.0148568991511 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2770.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 538.0 452.878318584 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14869888476 6.0361032391 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.224907063197 0.366273622748 61% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.128252788104 0.280924506359 46% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0650557620818 0.200843997647 32% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.046468401487 0.132149295362 35% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.07655676619 2.79330140395 74% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449814126394 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.5694838519 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.52 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5326088114 59.4972553346 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.52 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.28 0.674092028746 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 34.3452788104 51.4728631049 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.06806282723 1.64882698954 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437392610249 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119356297434 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875423119777 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473629680435 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195553213805 0.149214159877 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140742417317 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121673053695 0.0892212321368 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360268081151 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0433156467006 0.0692045440612 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291626037356 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913478183789 0.0653680567796 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.30420353982 245% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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