Every person has an in born talent. This talent when given an opportunity to express in society will flourish. Parents have been asking their kids about their interest to build up a career in life. Is that question suitable to ask the kid at his age of 5 or 10? As maturity builds over a period of time the kid starts realizing his potential and actual inclination towards what he wants to pursue as a career.
It is very true, artists, expert in the field of music, painting, dancing, singing etc. had passion towards these respective areas. They developed these talents by practicing for long hours and presenting their talent at concerts and competitions. These special talents were there within them since inception. Their efforts to present their talent in front of public has made them experts by now. Appreciation from the society for their outstanding performance has given them courage and enthusiasm to burgeon their passion. It has been studied and found that mentally retarded kids even though are slow learners, they have got few other talents such as creating articles from clay, painting, dancing etc. Society should encourage these mentally challenged kids to attend schools specially meant for them and pursue career in the same direction they are inclined towards.
Great achievers such as Bill Gates at his age of 12 who programmed a game Tic-Tac-Toe that can be played by a single user against computer, Mark Zuckerberg when he was a sophomore at college developed a social networking site where students could upload their photographs and communicate over internet. These talented personalities grabbed the opportunity at their early ages and entertained the public by providing a platform to utilize programmed software's. These people were identified by society with special talents. If they were given an opportunity to show their talent at private organizations, they would have added benefit at large scale. Nevertheless, they started up their own companies and grew at a great pace. After forming a company they started providing trainings to people who be masters like them.
Society and Government should encourage these talented children by providing them subsidized education or create a platform where they could get a chance to present their talent in front of public. Also advertising their talents to gain reputation in society, government should definitely take efforts to uplift these special talents. This would create eagerness amongst other children too and build confidence within them to further build career in areas where they have actual interest.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.18 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755555555556 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0244444444444 0.0497285424764 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.08 0.0444667217837 180% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0577777777778 0.0406280797675 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68820837472 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311111111111 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00444444444444 0.0016655270985 267% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733333333333 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.0249443105267 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0148568991511 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2634.0 2732.02544248 96% => OK
No of words: 416.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33173076923 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401442307692 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305288461538 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199519230769 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139423076923 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68820837472 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550480769231 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 63.8915371201 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9090909091 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5976176794 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.674092028746 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 49.4379370629 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.5390625 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358751735184 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0949984943021 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620098319854 0.077325440228 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.425656253515 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118584239493 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115213988028 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633881280234 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272150023558 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0225260355735 0.0692045440612 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236490853756 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493787285481 0.0653680567796 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.4325221239 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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