Being successful means differently among various people; however, we all need to feel success and accomplishment. Thus, students should try to satisfy their ambitions while planning for their future life. I believe that choosing a majoring study field is a delicate decision and should be based on realistic foundations. Earning a fortune is as important as doing interesting tasks for being satisfied from a particular job.
In my home country there are many students who enter universities seeking a career of prestige and fortune. They have no sensible passion toward what will be their permanent occupation after graduation. According to Science and Education ministry's accounts, a significant reduction in educational performance of students has been shown which is attributed to lack of interest in their study fields. No doubt, being involved in studies that are not fun but just duty will soon lead to despair and blaze. Human history avers that the most successful individuals are those who follow their personal interests passionately. Marry Curie, Albert Einstein, Charles Darwin, and all other glorious reverted figures of great achievements were those who choose their goals of study in such way.
However, job satisfaction is not merely achieving interests and studying what satiates our ambitions may not necessarily lead to a happy ending. The main reason why a person starts academic education is becoming a professional in a specific field in order to commence a career and earn a happy living. Although it is enormously amusing to be inundated in pure science, a job is the stage that educated graduates can perform on it and feel the feedbacks. Having a job not only is a promising way to earn a good fortune, but also is a good opportunity to feel success and usefulness. Therefore, it is a prominent factor in choosing an academic field of study.
In a nut shell, I believe that academic studies should end in good jobs and good jobs are those that lead to euphoric state of satisfaction. Thus, a good job should both address our material and spiritual needs. Accordingly, in choosing a study field it is necessary that one consider his / her ambitions as well as having a prosperous long-term life in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...l as having a prosperous long-term life in future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'no doubt', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239401496259 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.179551122195 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104738154613 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573566084788 0.0497285424764 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0473815461347 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0897755610973 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0648379052369 0.0406280797675 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91631543816 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274314214464 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872817955112 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199501246883 0.0249443105267 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0249376558603 0.0148568991511 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2241.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08967391304 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309782608696 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236413043478 0.200843997647 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141304347826 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91631543816 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58152173913 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 67.2993113235 55.4138127331 121% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4444444444 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1584138329 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.674092028746 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.422705314 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.38596491228 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345605555057 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0648692075267 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0505404606608 0.077325440228 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46418901593 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102511850005 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116556340548 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835262515038 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248288967166 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621131311354 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228162601427 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568601273604 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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