Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Writer presnts a discrepancy in attitude of people about the scientific discoveries in the present world. He/she contends that some people believe that the scientific discoveries have made better understanding of the world around us while rest of the people believe that such discoveries has made the understanding more complicated. I partially agree with what the author aserts about the attitude of people towards scientific discoveries. Because every discovery possess both positive as well as negative facet: the factor that makes such discoveries appealing to the people is the greater degree of its positive aspects as compared to that of its negative one.
While justifying the first attitude that the discoveries have given better understanding of the world around us, let us take an example of teliscope. Before the discpvery of teliscope, people were having false concept about the moon having its own light but, after the discovery of teliscope they could have a closer and more precise knowledge about it. Even after the discovery of rocket and satellite, the complexity about the space and the moon is substantialy reduced. People can travel form one place to another using cars, trains, airplanes etc. to know the world behind thier town and cities. This has helped people to understand the rest of the world more better than they could without such scientific discoveries.
As I have already stated that all discoveries have two opposite aspects, scientific discoveries too share some negativity. After every scientific discovery, people get to know something new that they had never know bwfore. This novice experience instigates a kind of greed among the people to know further more about the world around them. For an instance, when a simple microscope was discovered, people got to know that the human body is made up of several tiny structures called as cells. This new information induced a greed to know if these tiny cells further consist of more smaller particles. This made the understanding of human anatomy more intricated.
In a nutshell, scientific discoveries are made to simplify the live of people and help the better understand the world around them. It is the greed of people to dig more about their life and surrounding, that has made the world more complex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 487, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...e every discovery possess both positive as well as negative facet: the factor that makes s...
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Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ple to understand the rest of the world more better than they could without such scientific...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to share'?
Suggestion: to share
...pposite aspects, scientific discoveries too share some negativity. After every scientific...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... know something new that they had never know bwfore. This novice experience instigat...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smaller' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smaller
... if these tiny cells further consist of more smaller particles. This made the understanding ...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., that has made the world more complex.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240099009901 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.153465346535 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10396039604 0.0880659088768 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0420792079208 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039603960396 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143564356436 0.12292977631 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0470297029703 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74251072269 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272277227723 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133663366337 0.0997080785238 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00742574257426 0.0249443105267 30% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00990099009901 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2300.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 373.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16621983914 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361930294906 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249329758713 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182305630027 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144772117962 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74251072269 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482573726542 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 51.0287827497 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7222222222 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9038388626 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.777777778 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 45.6551980935 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.83157894737 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471951738335 0.391690518653 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124464318335 0.123202303941 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0679877564896 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559851894323 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167102018526 0.149214159877 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194694033246 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135165184637 0.0892212321368 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.459124503594 0.385218514788 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0984231044136 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351881245877 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808673612981 0.0653680567796 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.