Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
What are moral values? Moral values are something that shape the personality to be the good human being. Logical reasoning is no doubt necessary. But a person with good probity is always considered good than person with only logical reasoning. Therefore,Moral values are of cardinal importance than logical reasoning.
Morality is very important to observe a good and healthy environment. Good and healthy is where everyone is happy and satisfied. A person with good moral values is always considered as a affable person. On the contrary, if anyone is cruel and sadist he will be ostracized. Consider the example of Gandhi. The great Indian leader was known for his moral values. He, with the help of non-violence and truth, played an important role in freedom of India. Gandhi was not known for his logical reasoning but for his probity.
Moreover parents play an important role in developing the children. The habits of children crystallize into amiable personality when good moral values are taught at home. He is likely to be audacious and lovable in the society. To further elucidate, if the child sees a dog or cat suffering from illness, he will take it to the hospital. This is a result of values taught at home. Also a child who is regular in his prayers before having food or taking bath is also considered a good human being in a country like India.
Further a good citizen will always try to contribute good to the society. A sense of responsibility will flourish and consideration towards other will also develop. This can be done at school level as well. Children can readily be taught in their childhood. Developing moral values at early age is considered a good practice. A teacher who is herself/himself a moral person will always try to bring the best out of students. As a result various traditional Indian parents send their children to "Snanskar classes" where they are taught essential moral values.
But logical reasoning is also a important in order to survive. A person with good moral values can be duped by many fawning people. For example a tourist who have no idea about what goes on in particular country can be easily tricked by people. He/she might even loose the money or valuable items. Hence, logical reasoning along with moral values is also necessary.
In conclusion, I would state that the moral values are more important than logical reasoning. The people with moral values is always loved and exalted.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'no doubt', 'as a result', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227272727273 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.160173160173 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.140692640693 0.0880659088768 160% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0497835497835 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0444667217837 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11038961039 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0497835497835 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7538700203 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021645021645 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0865800865801 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025974025974 0.0249443105267 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.0148568991511 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2455.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92995169082 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371980676329 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256038647343 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159420289855 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118357487923 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7538700203 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466183574879 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 50.531961089 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6194690265 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.5454545455 23.380412469 54% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5678310286 59.4972553346 46% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3939393939 141.124799967 53% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5454545455 23.380412469 54% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.424242424242 0.674092028746 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 38.1493192798 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.61261261261 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188202986382 0.391690518653 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0788270795134 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0878375767924 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.41792242287 0.547984918172 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106434675143 0.149214159877 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657784389845 0.161403998019 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459997381939 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317620917324 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0633076604178 0.0692045440612 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134390802278 0.275328986314 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351708831196 0.0653680567796 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.4325221239 240% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 7.22455752212 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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