"Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society."Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely alig

The statement seems to be debatable. In today's world there is the desideratum for moral value in any of the education field that will help one pursue a valuable future to give back to the society. On one hand it seems true that logical reasoning can help curb the issues and help build the moral. On the same line if one doesn't have any moral values he can't imbibe the logical values required to dealt with future problem in doughty manner. So I believe that one should give morality more focus as the foundation of teaching in education.

The reason being the pivotal focus for morality is that it serves as the base for any learning that student wants to gain during his career. Morality is the quality of a person that shapes the well being and helps the person to grow irrespective of what field one's want to achieve in his life time. Also, these values turns out be the cardinal factor ones it is seen from the different part of the world. To illustrate this there is a good example of recent CEO of the most renowned firm of the World which is Google. Sunder Pichai was honored with this title as he has esteemed talent that is laudable and a necessity for the giant firm like google. At the same time the nature of a person plays a crucial role in determining his success. His moral values that was laid as the foundation while education has made him the person that he is today and has raise the pride and the dignity of the country at the same time.

Though, logical reasoning is no behind in playing an imperative role in education. This is the reasoning that comes later in respect to the moral values that person needs to inculcate in his life career. An captivating personality of India late President Dr APJ Abul Kalam can make it clearer to understand. He has diligently and sedulously worked in the field of science and has bring great pride towards his country. At the same time today, he is known for his the moral values that he has inhabitated more as compared to his success he achieved in his life career. He is remembered today as the kind of person he was lovable, affectionate, complaisant towards society well being which was all the result of the moral values that was laid as the foundation in his time of career education.

However, one cannot simply ignore the logical reasoning as some time these lays the base for producing the moral values that builds the callow human to a debonair being that the society requires for it's country to be growing in a celerity manner.

In a nutshell, we can say that though the logical reasoning makes a person robust in pursuing his dream in order to fulfill the dreams of his and plays a cardinal role in the society. One must not forget the moral value that when inculcate is bound to succeed in his life ahead.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...uild the moral. On the same line if one doesnt have any moral values he cant imbibe th...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... if one doesnt have any moral values he cant imbibe the logical values required to d...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
... if one doesnt have any moral values he cant imbibe the logical values required to d...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... what field ones want to achieve in his life time. Also, these values turns out be the ca...
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...him the person that he is today and has raise the pride and the dignity of the countr...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity of the country at the same time. Though, logical reasoning is no behind in play...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2285.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50690335306 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34181684664 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439842209073 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7010722128 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.80952381 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179643626732 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645178469636 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746487209106 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11123045607 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478288868952 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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