Sometimes imagination is a more valuable asset than experience. People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible and thus can approach a task without constraints of established habits and attitudes
Imagination is something which could give birth to most beautiful and brilliant ideas. Most of the people live with prosaic mindset and follows the same mundane routine every day. This happens when we do not want to try something new and want to live in our own bubble which we have set around us. Imaginations breaks this wall and let you think in every direction you want to. Imagination has given us many life changing ideas which we could not have got without thinking apart from league.Experience in particular field will definitely make you sound in your profession or work but we will just be acquitted with the part of work which we may be doing it currently. It gives us high performance but not the valuable asset.
Consider the field of technology, if an IT person has been working in some industry for very long time then he/she is called as an Experience person; We can say an IT person could handle the problems encountered while working and troubleshoot the same issue efficiently however if the same IT guy without any constraints or restrictions comes up with the better idea or remedy and creates some remedy tool software by using the imagination,he/she adds a utilitarian idea to the world which would be useful for all of us. Also consider the case of any big multinational cooperative firm and tech giants like Google, Yahoo, Facebook ETC. They all were once a startup company,originated by an imaginative idea with the human just like us. We just need a better imagination and think out of the box,come up with the idea which has never been done before(unprecedented). An idea can change our life.
A small imagination give rise to multiple series of provision thoughts which once in its final form can come up like a big bang. For example when an Einstein saw the apple falling, his mind worked in imaginative way and here we are acknowledging the Gravity.
If imagination would have not been that important then why is there dedicated creative department in every Field?
When we have a experience of some field ,it could be education, science, technology, Sports etc. We tend to think in a way where we measure the success possibility of our method more then taking chance and going ahead with an idea.Once we are not bounded in chains of seeing the probability of the success or failure, we can move mountains. Consider a case of Steve jobs, he was not technical developer, He saw the idea which he thought can change our way of looking at Computer and mobiles. He implemented his idea and we are witnessing the success of the same idea.
Conclusively, a limited mindset can survive but can never go too far. One exemplary imagination could bring change to society and therefore it is more valuable asset.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...n you want to. Imagination has given us many life changing ideas which we could not ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
...n you want to. Imagination has given us many life changing ideas which we could not have ...
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Suggestion: Experience
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
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Suggestion: considers
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in particular']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220502901354 0.238963963785 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.174081237911 0.154291517835 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0754352030948 0.0886310499679 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0618955512573 0.0506014161523 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0754352030948 0.0449626384858 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0986460348162 0.123526278965 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0502901353965 0.0379742944744 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90721978354 2.82910677849 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154738878143 0.0316879551592 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00773694390716 0.0014075125626 550% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0986460348162 0.0950106342287 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328820116054 0.0245489744465 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251450676983 0.0157978311181 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2744.0 2899.98275862 95% => OK
No of words: 475.0 478.390804598 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77684210526 6.0591788892 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.65681771538 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28 0.369966551584 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214736842105 0.285172536893 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157894736842 0.207245337619 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111578947368 0.136322040163 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90721978354 2.82910677849 103% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 234.298850575 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.492565540709 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.1196609774 56.8184620615 108% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 21.1264367816 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.75 23.7468607788 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.619316415 62.0618507366 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 143.81877709 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.7468607788 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.728815259664 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.87931034483 123% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.71264367816 194% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.2236842105 52.2641144681 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.18633540373 1.64547068916 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195552338563 0.39480681544 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954896312801 0.11556216369 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069289732879 0.0736162880345 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529201287893 0.531340600358 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19620404095 0.15197228837 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792045311572 0.158818324754 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483391723721 0.0851127212816 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.151505177581 0.388921930462 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107178163435 0.0677916285025 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126924182061 0.28015025965 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474333502682 0.0610219844235 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.8591954023 111% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30459770115 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.10632183908 123% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.93390804598 76% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 15.0862068966 113% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.5 Out of 6