Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
To quote Nelson Mandela "Education is the most powerful weapon one can use to change the world." . Hence teaching is one of the most puissant and noble proffessions of our society. Teachers by taking care of children today are shaping the future of our society . Decision of a teachers salary on the basis of his/her students academic performance is not justifiable, as doing effort is more important than the immidiate result.
Primarily, decision of the salary on the basis of studet's performance will increase corruption in such a noble field of work. For example, a teacher who is in special eduction field can not get the same academic performance from his class as a teacher teaching in a normal school. So, to ensure a handsome wage he/she can tweak the results of his/her student to get more emolument. Moreover, in the schools today there is no distiction between an obtuse and an meritorious student as they are given same amount of attention by their teachers but, in case of performance dependent salary sytem teachers might be willing to direct their entire attention to students which are doing good in there class. This will not only lead to demotivation of such students but also hinder their chances of getting better.
Also, if the wages are not on the efforts put in by the teachers it might prevent a future workforce from coming into this field as there will be no stabiliy. Nowdays the wages are decided by the government so the school authority can only modify them by giving bonuses but atleast a bottemline is there. However if the salaries are based on their students' academic performance, it will give the school authority to establish their own critirion for paying the teachers. is not a practically sound scenario.
Critics might agree that wage dependent on students' academic performance will give teachers the incentive to put in more hardwork and effort. Although, teching is not considered to be a very lucrative profession. People who join this profession are not incentivesed by the money involved in this profession but by their willingness to give back to the society in the best possible way. Hence for them incadescent future of the children is the incentive.
Therefore, from the examples given above we can conclude that judging teachers on an absolute scale of their student's academic performance rather than their own efforts is not justified and favourable for this nobel proffession. Hence, it is not a good decision to beguile them by creating such a wage system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97867298578 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78950216207 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473933649289 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4527328606 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.578947368 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315904647569 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809120386687 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077422985679 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167551475385 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409405778078 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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