The innovation of smartphones and mobile applications brings solutions to the world's problems. Technology allows us to accelerate our moves in a way we never imagined before. Technology enables many ways to improve our life quality and make our lives easier.
Technology has provided us with many ways to stay connected to people we love, even from a great distance. This has been used thoroughly by people who study outside their country. An Indonesian student who studies in the United States used his Skype application to do a video call with his parents back in Jakarta with just a few clicks away from their computers. This demonstrates that the use of technology able to break physical barriers and distance problems. In the past, postal services were used as the main communication between countries and it could take weeks for the delivery. This shows the development from postal to mobile applications such as Skype dramatically changes the way we communicate.
Additionally, technology introduces a new concept of an economic process called "economic-sharing". Instead of buying or selling goods/services, people renting and borrowing goods/services from other people. This has been exemplified by various companies such as Airbnb and Grab. Airbnb allows some people to host their places to visitors who want to stay in the area. In this way, both parties mutually gain benefits from each other interaction. The visitor can pay cheaper cost compared to book a hotel, where they charged you with taxes and additional cost and the host can gain money without lengthy setup of the room. Not only that, the visitor and the host can interact with each other in a different way if hotels want to interact with the customer.
Development of technology, however, allows a bigger chance for digital crime. Hackers can easily steal data from your online activities and use the data for inappropriate purposes without consent. Data and privacy leaks still frequently occurred even companies already invest a huge amount of money to improve personal data protection.
Today's use of technology makes people's lives easier with the increasing complexity of the world. Many problems of the past have been solved with technology. Technology also allows for a more cheaper and efficient life. Although there are still some problems arisen from technology development, its use has more benefits to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e quality and make our lives easier. Technology has provided us with many ways to stay ...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d the host can interact with each other in a different way if hotels want to interact with the cus...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...echnology. Technology also allows for a more cheaper and efficient life. Although there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27461139896 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03648604861 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7746674192 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5217391304 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.60869565217 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855046862133 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280796357234 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571828559223 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642033187494 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074152301781 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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