Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The main aim of technology is to simplify the lives of human beings, it might be complicated to develop a technology, but any end product of good technology is definitely making complicated tasks easier.
If we have to know how technology has made our lives easier there should be a fair comparison between the times where technology was not flourished and today's world where we use technology in every part of our lives. If we go back in time, few decades, any communication between two far places was made through postal system,telegram etc, where message which we are supposed to send used to take lot of time to reach the other person. Today with the help of technology the same message reaches the destination in a fraction of seconds with the help of e-mail, messengers etc. This is just an example of communication. There are many such instances like accessing knowledge was through books, daily news was through newspapers, money transactions through physical banking,investing in share through pink slips, reaching far places through roadways and this list goes on. Technology, on, the other hand has given access to knowledge through internet, websites and television can give everyday news, online money transactions, investing through online platforms, use flight to travel and so on.
As the aim of technology is to simplify our lives, some might see complications made by technology as there will be always different opinions among people. But, those who claim that technology is making our lives complicated should actually consider the things which it has made easy and things which technology made complicated and weigh the both sides of the discussions, only to realise that the other side has more weight.
Simplification of complicated things in our daily life is only possible through the technology and it keeps simplifying further in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , telegram
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , investing
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tforms, use flight to travel and so on. As the aim of technology is to simplify ...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nology and it keeps simplifying further in future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255952380952 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.184523809524 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.077380952381 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386904761905 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0357142857143 0.0444667217837 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127976190476 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0565476190476 0.0406280797675 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94647983551 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297619047619 0.030933414821 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0803571428571 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178571428571 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238095238095 0.0148568991511 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1873.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 304.0 452.878318584 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16118421053 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348684210526 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276315789474 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141447368421 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94647983551 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 60.2013354817 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 30.4 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0746439709 59.4972553346 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.3 141.124799967 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 58.0315789474 51.4728631049 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.70114942529 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329154079148 0.391690518653 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162585270241 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0958615796783 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607601637036 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.251035384419 0.149214159877 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15487203253 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844033933794 0.0892212321368 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290798955141 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0188562079727 0.0692045440612 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235773996166 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042979838671 0.0653680567796 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.