To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The cultures and tradition of society shows the characteristics of people of a country. The cultures and traditions are very important in order to understand the people behavior how they live and their life style. Today the world is globalized, by the passage of time people begins to follow other cultures and they start to celebrate the occasion of other countries, we can easily see in our society like New Year parties, or valentine’s days and Halloween day etc. These festival are celebrated in almost every country
The given issue say that in order to understand the characteristics of a society, we have look at their major cities, well I totally disagree with given statement. But it could be true if go back 100 years ago, when there is no transportation system available, People cannot travel far away from their countries. At that time, People have no idea of other cultures and traditions, even they don’t know about countries. Well, if talk about of this era, where transportation system available, long travel is not a big deal, people usually go to other countries and live there, in that manner the cultures and tradition exchanged, so its become really difficult to the characteristics of society by looking at the major cities of a country.
Even after this we also some major cities but they are in few numbers, we can take example of famous cities like Delhi, Paris and Rome. Countries like Pakistan and India majors cities reflect the mores of society. These cities could reflect the characteristics of their society. However I must say, in order to understand the characteristics of society, we have to look at their rural area, where people are living same as their ancestors. We can have hundreds of example where, in rural areas people reflect their norms, those villages are very important to understand the mores of the society.
To sum up we could say that in order to understand the norms of a society one must look at their villages, not their major cities because people living in those cities, couldn’t reflect the cultures and society, it’s because of several reason as I discussed above. This statement is not true but could be true in third world countries people are not living luxurious life, so those people follow the tradition and culture of their countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this festival' or 'These festivals'?
Suggestion: This festival; These festivals
...tine's days and Halloween day etc. These festival are celebrated in almost every country ...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...t the characteristics of their society. However I must say, in order to understand the ...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...tures and society, it's because of several reason as I discussed above. This statement is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, third, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96163682864 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78415736579 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452685421995 0.4932671777 92% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0978393472 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189727294765 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803285652846 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632635294993 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120316532769 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450039491099 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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