To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
I partially agree with above the given statement, studying major cities is very important to know the basic behavior of the society because we can get picture of social ,economic ,political things but to get the full understanding it’s also important to know the traditions, lifestyle and culture in small cities.
Let’s consider the developed countries, it’s easy to get complete understanding of the society in major cities because most of the things like culture, lifestyle, business related things are same in the major cities and small cities. take for instance Singapore country its easy to the new person to get the full understanding of that society by living in the major city
But in some other countries,few cities only developed.their lifestyle is different from other cities(rural areas). so, here we have to look both major cities and the rural areas to get the complete picture of the society.
Looking into big picture,we can see more technology development and new lifestyles changes in the major cities and lacking of the culture and traditions.in contrast people in rural areas will give more importance to traditions festivals.
Perhaps, we can see mixed cultures in the major cities because people will come from different areas for job or business related purposes. to know the complete details of the particular culture you have to see the origin of that birth place for examples,people will give more important to particular music in the native of that music place.
In conclusion, as per my view, we can get the basic understanding by visiting major cities,but to get clear picture of society,culture..etc its important to consider small cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26199261993 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02671663734 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476014760148 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4417794123 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.25 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 5.21951772744 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268767903733 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126362805006 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517685957217 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142062239947 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559219066048 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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