To understand the most important characteristics of a society/country, It is adequate to study its major cities.
The most important characteristics of any society – and country too, are often explicitly understood by observing some major, and mega-cities of that society, and the country. Although, some people would argue that to know the society, or country, thoroughly one must go through the every corner of the country, but the fact is the representation of a country is preserved in major cities of any country. Therefore, I support the contention that to have in-depth knowledge about any country, it is sufficient to observe its major cities, and its associated lifestyle.
Those who claim that it is not sufficient for one to have complete knowledge about any country unless he visits the every corner of it would give reasons like, in Nepal Raute is very endangered, and most valued ethnic group living in jungles of some remote regions; it is not possible to know about them in detail by simply studying some cities – Kathmandu, Pokhara, and Chitwan. Clearly, it is almost impossible to have meticulous knowledge about something without going there. However, their claim has lots of fallacies because the government of Nepal has done a lot to preserve their culture, tradition and life style by making museums in cities like Pokhara and Chitwan. The government is doing its best to bring them to city area of Chitwan and promoting their natural way of life in the capital city, that is, Kathmandu. Hence, one can gain complete knowledge about them by visiting cities like Kathmandu, Pokhara, and Chitwan of Nepal.
Now, consider the other aspect of the argument: it is adequate for one to gain information about any society/country by visiting its main cities. Nepal is considered as a Hindu country full of temples in each walk. When one arrives to Kathmandu by airplane, he will see big photo of Gautam Buddha with caption “Welcome to Nepal – Birthplace of Lord Buddha”. Kathmandu valley alone harbors seven out of ten UNESCO world heritage site and everyone can observe the cultural treasure which is the clear representation of entire Nepal. By walking few hours in the valley and reaching the Nagarkot, a very popular tourist distination for sightseeing, everyone can observe the Mt. Everest and its associated himalayan range, and easily the himalayan treasure of Nepal can be studied.
Like Nepal, India and Pakistan are also rich countries. Indian and Pakistani cities like Mumbai and Islamabad easily gives the information about the beauty of the respective countries. While having dinner at Hotal Taz of Mumbai, or having meal at Hotel Monal located in vertex of Islamabad, one can understand the food habits and associated tradition of peoples of respective countries.
To recapitulate, it is clear that it is enough to observe, or visit, some major cities of any society, or country, to have comprehensive understanding about that society or country. The examples of Nepal, India and Pakistan illustrated above are enough to bolster this argument. The crux of people, and their lifestyles are vividly mirrored in cities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275310834813 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.13676731794 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0692717584369 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337477797513 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408525754885 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13676731794 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0479573712256 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80809418958 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284191829485 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0852575488455 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159857904085 0.0249443105267 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00710479573712 0.0148568991511 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3065.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 498.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1546184739 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387550200803 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293172690763 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21686746988 0.200843997647 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13453815261 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80809418958 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 219.290929204 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.6975386208 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8916304002 59.4972553346 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.25 141.124799967 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 54.2172690763 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.17647058824 1.64882698954 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473995469117 0.391690518653 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157942616908 0.123202303941 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0941595402116 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556244403748 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152001805612 0.149214159877 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181951577343 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115542033266 0.0892212321368 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373803663225 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0783350929538 0.0692045440612 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323324931905 0.275328986314 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122089961334 0.0653680567796 187% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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