unlike great thinkers and great artists the most effective political leaders must often yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise
The statement "Unlike great thinkers and great artists the most effective political leaders must often yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise" is complex and controversial statement.I partially agree with the statement and partially disagree with statement.I provide enough evidences and examples to advocate my view on the given statement.
The concepts which we have to take into consideration are "Liberty of Thought" and "Pervasive effect of a Thought" . Take the case of Great thinkers probably philosophers among whom the liberty of though is very high and is not circumscribed. Moreover the impact of their thoughts on common people is nominal until unless the thought is a remarkable one or one which shows some drastic effect on their social or economical life.Next considering the case of Great artists among whom the limit is very high and are confined to a particular art field as result their impact is also circumscribed to particular level which is also nominal.Finally we can say that as liberty of thoughts is high and pervasive effect of their thoughts is low in case of Great thinkers and Great artists.This implies that their thoughts don't need a public opinion and at the same time they no need to compromise at any instance.To prove this theory we have examples which are deduced from the life's of many artists. Let us consider the life of Michael Jackson, Pop King his liberty of experimenting only effects his market or sales of their album but never shows any impact on the life of individuals.But viewing this issue from other side the when the remarkable thoughts by some artists may influence the field of art in large manner.
Let us now consider the case of political aspirants or political leaders among whom the Liberty of thought is low most precisely speaking it is little.Particularly among the political candidates who prevail in democratic environment this liberty level is suppressed.The profound study regarding this issue also makes us to think this suppression as a good thing.Because political candidates thoughts influence a lot of people that is the pervasive effect of a thought is high in case of them, so what they need to take the peoples' opinion into consideration.Though sometimes a good willing political candidate uses his liberty to implement a good decision he some times need to compromise or fight against odds if it doesn't favors many people.To emphasize this statement consider the Anti slavery act by Abraham Lincoln during 19th century.This was initially opposed by many american lords but eventually AB's stubborn attitude won the game.So finally we can say that in case of political candidates the liberty of thought is low and pervasive effect of the thought is high .
So I provided irrefutable evidences and logical overview to support my view on this statement.Finally this statement is partially accepted one.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267080745342 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.149068322981 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12215320911 0.0880659088768 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0517598343685 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0517598343685 0.0444667217837 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0227743271222 0.0406280797675 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04750407529 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227743271222 0.030933414821 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105590062112 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00828157349896 0.0249443105267 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0227743271222 0.0148568991511 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2910.0 2732.02544248 107% => OK
No of words: 476.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11344537815 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359243697479 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308823529412 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21218487395 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147058823529 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04750407529 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457983193277 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 51.6976798237 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.380412469 291% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 339.310164533 59.4972553346 570% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 415.714285714 141.124799967 295% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 23.380412469 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.674092028746 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.21349557522 460% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 98.8823529412 51.4728631049 192% => OK
Elegance: 1.66393442623 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447946532097 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.259273338395 0.123202303941 210% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0928613184345 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.806473017172 0.547984918172 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201087324959 0.149214159877 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251581929296 0.161403998019 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160378815533 0.0892212321368 180% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350224361683 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.172460873158 0.0692045440612 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304672059453 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198671517914 0.0653680567796 304% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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