"As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Knowledge is the state of being enlightened. It is acquiring information and skills which help you to understand things around you in a better way. It also helps in bringing perfection in a person's work and life. Knowledge is gained consciously as well as unconsciously. While one makes an effort to acquire knowledge through getting educated and becoming learned it is also through experience that one becomes knowledgeable. It is however questionable as to why gaining knowledge is important. As discussed earlier, it makes you understand your surroundings better and bring perfection in your life. Things become more comprehensible and you gain confidence. However, as a person gains more and more knowledge, it can lead to details, complexities and mysteries, but it is only with more efforts that new study comes to light.
When a child comes into this world, he is completely ignorant and therefore is dependent on his parents. As he grows up, he observes things around him. Slowly he gets the knowledge about what is good and what is bad for him. It is only when he gains the knowledge of his surroundings that he is capable of being on his own. He comes to know that by putting his hand in a fire, he might get burnt, and by playing with sharp objects he can hurt himself. In case this does not happen, he would remain dependent upon others all his life. Therefore, knowledge makes you independent and practical in life.
It is with exercising one's brain and gaining knowledge that we are living in this age. Without the knowledge of agriculture, we would not be able to produce food for ourselves, without the knowledge of iron we would not be able to set up industries. Similarly, the knowledge of human body and medicines helps us to keep fit and live a healthy life. Such things are basic to our life and life is incomprehensible without them.
Apart from the basic knowledge of things, one needs to acquire specific knowledge as well. That makes him survive in the world by making a place for himself. For example, if a person gains the knowledge of carpentry, he can extend his knowledge to others who do not have this specific skill and earn his living.
A person goes on acquiring information unless he is satisfied. However, there are unlimited things unknown to man. There are a number of things that are untenable and accepted as they are. It is only with the efforts of someone that we can have an explanation of these things. We did not know anything about the universe unless it was explored. The biggest of inventions and discoveries have been possible only by indulging in them. If we retreat our steps from the fear of getting jumbled up in complexities, new inventions and discoveries would never be possible.
However, in the pursuit of acquiring knowledge, one must not lose ground and get lost in the complexities. Sometimes, a problem can prove to be highly convoluted and might mitigate the chances in finding a reliable solution to it. For instance, as people rely more and more on technological products, some of these products result in having harmful side effects on the environment. Despite the concern, industries are ruthlessly manufacturing these products and are also being set up in places by acquiring areas which had vegetation and trees grown. This has ultimately led to global warming. Global warming, being a worldwide problem has led to various issues such as climate change and holes in the ozone layer which serves as a protective layer against the harmful ultraviolet rays. Thus, keeping a balance and not indulging too much in a problem is also an equally important aspect in acquiring and implementing acquired knowledge. A concern on the negative side effects is also equally important as one understands the implications of his /her knowledgeable skills .
In conclusion, as important and essential it is to gain knowledge for a better development of the human population as well as the surroundings around them, it is equally important to balance the harmful side effects of an efficient research or solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... also helps in bringing perfection in a persons work and life. Knowledge is gained cons...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ical in life. It is with exercising ones brain and gaining knowledge that we are...
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Line 11, column 1071, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cations of his /her knowledgeable skills . In conclusion, as important and esse...
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Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding surroundings'?
Suggestion: the surrounding surroundings
...ment of the human population as well as the surroundings around them, it is equally important to balance the...
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Line 13, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of an efficient research or solution.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202113606341 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.177014531044 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0726552179657 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0660501981506 0.0497285424764 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0779392338177 0.0444667217837 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.129458388375 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0568031704095 0.0406280797675 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89564673369 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250990752972 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00528401585205 0.0016655270985 317% => OK
Determiners: 0.0752972258917 0.0997080785238 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158520475561 0.0249443105267 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132100396301 0.0148568991511 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4086.0 2732.02544248 150% => OK
No of words: 690.0 452.878318584 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92173913043 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.12521717326 4.58838876751 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340579710145 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273913043478 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192753623188 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147826086957 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89564673369 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 219.290929204 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446376811594 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.1789071576 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 39.0 20.6194690265 189% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 17.6923076923 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9463302338 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.435897435897 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 45.0836120401 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.20987654321 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358457537532 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118695594519 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0873800548326 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459209454121 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149679521153 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112084077522 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676284271775 0.0892212321368 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308382037584 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0656972862723 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213967990053 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683476169766 0.0653680567796 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.5995575221 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.