The bar chart shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005.

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The bar chart shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005.

The bar chart depicts the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005.

In general, the number of people in Great Britain increased as people got older. The proportion of men and woman were always different over the period. Started at the value of below 10 percent. The lowest percentage of people living alone in age between 16 and 24, the percentage of men was higher than women. The percentage of men was much higher than women in 25-44, just below 10 percent for women whereas just over 10 for men. Between 65 and 74, by contrast, the number of women was nearly twice as much as men, just under 20 percent for men while just over 30 percent for women. There was a similarity, between 45 and 64, the percentage of women and men were almost similar, just under 20 percent. For 75 and over, the percentage of women was a lot higher than men.

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the percentage of women was a lot higher than men.
the percentage of women was a lot higher than that of men.

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