Changes of travelling modes in England between 1985 and 2000
Table of average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel shows that travelling in England between 1985 and 2000 had been changed.
In whole, travelling modes in England has significan increasing during 5 years, from 4,740 miles to 6,475 miles in all modes. Car is the greatest transportation which people prefer to use, while the least number of citizen in England travelling by taxi or bicycle.
In 1985, persons spend their times on vacation by car for 3,199 miles. If they have no car or the other reason, they prefer to take a benefit of local bus or other modes of transportation. The data shows that 429 miles is the average distance which they take per year by local bus. Then, decreasely the others are train, walking, long distance bus, and bicycle. The distances are around 289, 255, 54, and 51 miles respectively.
On the other hand, in 2000 people still enjoy in vacation by car. They spend 4,806 miles, and after that they would rather to choose other, train, local bus, walking, long distance bus, taxi, and bicycle. They are 585, 366, 274, 237, 124, 42, and 41 miles.
Sentence: In whole, travelling modes in England has significan increasing during 5 years, from 4,740 miles to 6,475 miles in all modes.
Description: The fragment has significan increasing is rare
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while the least number of citizen in England travelling by taxi or bicycle.
while the least number of citizen in England travelling is taxi or bicycle.
The data shows that 429 miles is the average distance
The data shows that 429 miles are the average distance
Sentence: In whole, travelling modes in England has significan increasing during 5 years, from 4,740 miles to 6,475 miles in all modes.
Error: significan Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Then, decreasely the others are train, walking, long distance bus, and bicycle.
Error: decreasely Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 195 200
No. of Characters: 873 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.477 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.288 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.626 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
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