The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.
The bar chart illustrates spending of fast foods by three different income categories in Britain.
It is clear that, in each of the given groups,some of fast foods are popular among high income brackets,while other are more common for other income categories. It should be also noted that hamburgers is the most popular fast foods.
According to the bar chart,the hightest proportion of high income brackets who said that they enjoyed hamburgers. The relivant for low income groups,at about a third and 14% in term.
When it comes to Fish and Chips,average income groups headed the list,at to a peak of quarter,followed by high income and low income groups at nearly 18%. Finally, pizza ranked on the list,at about one-fifths. Next comes Average income and Low income brackets are not quite as high as that,at to a low of 17%.
The bar chart illustrates spending of fast foods by three different income categories in Britain.
The bar chart illustrates the spending of fast foods by three different income categories in Britain.
the hightest proportion of high income brackets who said that they enjoyed hamburgers.
the hightest proportion of high income brackets said that they enjoyed hamburgers.
The relivant for low income groups,at about a third and 14% in term.
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Next comes Average income and Low income brackets are not quite as high as that,at to a low of 17%.
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Sentence: According to the bar chart,the hightest proportion of high income brackets who said that they enjoyed hamburgers.
Error: hightest Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The relivant for low income groups,at about a third and 14 in term.
Error: relivant Suggestion: relevant
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