The chart below shows how people travelled to work in 1996 and 2001 .

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The chart below shows how people travelled to work in 1996 and 2001 .

This bar chart shows about which transport people mostly used to get to their work in Grahamston between 1996 and 2001.

first of all, the most useful transportation of the workers is drove car or truck from the others. For example, it illustrates 68 percent of drove car in 2001. which is the highest one that people can use transport to get their work. and following this, the truck 58 percent in 1996, respectively. in 1996, Private vehicle passengers used to get to work in Grahamston over 10 percent of people. however, by 2001, it had a bit less percentage.

In this chart you can see that other transportation, is included taxi, cycling and ferry is almost equal percentage for both year.

nevertheless, the lowest percentage of the transportation has bicycle which is 6 percentage of people used in 2001 and only 4 percentage of people that work to used in 1996.

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other transportation, is included taxi, cycling and ferry is almost equal percentage for both year.
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which is 6 percentage of people used in 2001 and only 4 percentage of people that work to used in 1996.
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