The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

A survey was carried out on adult education and the charts show the results of collected data. The first chart depicts the reasons for study and their respective percentages. The pie chart explains how people think the cost of each adult education course should be shared.

The interest in subject and to gain qualification are the most significant with corresponding percentages of 40% and 30% respectively. The least important reason is to meet the people as only 9% consider this aspect as a reason for study.

Three reasons for study like helpful for current job, to improve prospects of promotion and enjoying learning are almost at the same level. Their respective percentages are 22%, 20% and 20%. Only 12% of the people consider study helpful in changing jobs.

Individuals with a highest value of 40% believe that costs of each course should be shared. Employer and taxpayer occupy the remaining portion of the circle with percentage of 35% and 25% respectively.

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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.562 4.0
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