Chorleywood
The map showed development of Chorleywood village during 1868 – 1994 for infrastructures factors, especially around Chorleywood Station and Chorleywood Park and Golf course.
The greatest increasing was seemed at the last 24 years and dominated by main roads. Vice versa, the first exploration, 1868 – 1883, was time of establishing. Thus, at that time, the village was the smallest developing.
Moreover, motorway which was created in 1970 and railway which was built in 1909 had same quality in goverment’s attention. It was watched in totality of the paths and was showed by station in that village.
On the other hand, developing of Chorleywood was significant enough in year by year. Local goverment was throughout to improve its region to become advance place. Developing of village was occured in different time. The first was during 1868 – 1883, and continued for 39 years, 48 years, and 24 years later respectively until 1994.
Sentence: The map showed development of Chorleywood village during 1868 ? 1994 for infrastructures factors, especially around Chorleywood Station and Chorleywood Park and Golf course.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to infrastructures and factors
The greatest increasing was seemed at the last 24 years and dominated by main roads.
The greatest increase was seemed at the last 24 years and was dominated by main roads.
the village was the smallest developing.
the village was in the smallest development.
Sentence: Local goverment was throughout to improve its region to become advance place.
Description: The fragment was throughout to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace throughout with adjective
Sentence: Local goverment was throughout to improve its region to become advance place.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
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