The diagram illustrates the process that is use to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
This diagram provides information about how bricks are produced for using in the industry of building.
Generally, the process of manufacturing bricks contains eight stages, which begins with digging the clay and ending with delivery stage.
First of all, the clay dug up by a large digger and then clay pieces ought to go through metal grids. Following that, tiny clays pieces are rolled by four rollers in order, then sand and water are added to material. In next step, the mixture are cut in two ways, either by a wire cutter or by a mould which the material is poured in it to shape. Then the cut or shaped bricks are put in a drying oven over the period of 24-48 hrs. Subsequently, bricks are placed into the first kilns under moderate temperature of 200 to 980 centigrade, then they are put into the next kiln with high temperature 870 - 1300 centigrade and at least they are seated in a cooling chamber about 48-72 hrs.
Finally the bricks are packed and delivered to trucks to distribute among cities or they may exported to other countries to put up buildings.
the clay dug up by a large digger
the clay is dug up by a large digger
Sentence: Following that, tiny clays pieces are rolled by four rollers in order, then sand and water are added to material.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to clays and pieces
In next step, the mixture are cut in two ways,
In the next step, the mixtures are cut in two ways,
or they may exported to other countries to put up buildings.
or they may be exported to other countries to put up buildings.
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