The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The first diagram illustrates the construction of a wind turbine which consists of 4 crucial components, while the second picture describes how the wind turbines work in the optimum locations. It is noticeable that the blades are the most important part of the wind turbine. Computer, the advanced technology which is control the speed and direction of the wind. In sharp contrast to this, the strategic locations determine the output of electricity. More higher the wind turbine is placed, more bigger the electricity is produced.
The tower can be placed on the hill, and in this case the tower can be installed under the sea. However, wind turbine tends to be lower and less wind strengths only 100 kilowatts, so landcapeis not spoilled. Alternatively, the tower can be placed on the hill where the wind aremaximum strength and more electricity can be generated. In general, while the wind turbine appears to be a simple way of harnessing renewable energy, its instalation may cause a number problems related to its location.
Computer, the advanced technology which is control the speed and direction of the wind.
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More higher the wind turbine is placed, more bigger the electricity is produced.
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so landcapeis not spoilled.
so landscapes are not spoiled.
where the wind aremaximum strength
where the wind are in maximum strength
Sentence: However, wind turbine tends to be lower and less wind strengths only 100 kilowatts, so landcapeis not spoilled.
Error: landcapeis Suggestion: landscapes
Error: spoilled Suggestion: spoiled
Sentence: In general, while the wind turbine appears to be a simple way of harnessing renewable energy, its instalation may cause a number problems related to its location.
Error: instalation Suggestion: installation
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