The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the daily usage of electricity in England during the two seasons: winter and summer while the pie chart shows the purpose of electricity consumption in an average English home.
It can be seen from the graph that during winter days, electricity demand is twice as high as that in summer. The usage in winter fluctuates from 30000 units of electricity to 40000 units per day while in summer that number is in the range of 15000 to 20000 units. To be specific, the demand in winter day peaks at 3 o’clock and 22 o’clock with 40000 units and nearly 50000 units respectively. ...
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