The graph below shows the number of students enrolled in universities by gender within three years in country A
The bar chart illustrates the number of pupils registered in college; boys and girls, in two decades, 2001 until 2021.
In general, It can be seen from the graph that the number of female in public colleges increase significantly from 2001 to 2021.
In 2001, boys who registered in public college are higher than that in private college. While girls in Public college stood at 70 and Private college at 30. It is known that boys in public college was at the highest place. Interestingly, the number of girls in Public College in 2011 went up considerably, it was at 70 to 210.Furthermore,it will be predicted in 2021 that female student in public college will stand at the highest level, at approximately 600. Boys will be predicted at 300 in public college.
overall, It can be concluded that the number of pupils registering to the college has been change for male student from preferring public college changes to Private College, while female students preferred more in Public College.
Sentence: overall, It can be concluded that the number of pupils registering to the college has been change for
Sentence: overall, It can be concluded that the number of pupils registering to the college has been changing for
It can be concluded that the number of pupils registering to the college has been change for male student from preferring public college changes to Private College,
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 170 200
No. of Characters: 799 1000
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.611 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.7 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.585 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.825 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.572 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.783 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.259 0.07
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