The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph represents the total aging population of three different countries over a period of century.Besides,the graph reveals highest percentage of aged population in Japan and Sweden.
A closer look at the graph reveals aging population increased persistently over each 20 year period interval. Japan in the year 1940 had the least percentage of elderly people which is 5 percentage.Overall, a difference from 20 year period Japan's proportion of population declined gradually and was stable for another 20 year time period starting from 1960 to 1980.However, in the year 2000 number of old Japanese people rose and had reached at a peak of about 27 percentage until 2040.
The aging population of Sweden and USA increased at a high phase form the staring year 1940.Moreover, over interval of 20 year period starting from 1980 to 2020 USA and Sweden's elderly population were stable and increased dramatically from the 2020.Starting until 40 year period Sweden and USA had the same rate of percentage which we find in common consisting 14 and 15 percentage respectively.
All in all, the aging population of three different countries have rose over a century where Japan and Sweden have dominated precisely having 27 and 26 percentage respectively and USA being the least.
three different countries have rose over a century
three different countries have risen over a century
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