The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph depicts the number of people living on Earth while the bar chart illustrates the urban population figures.
Overall, it is notable in the line graph that the global population has gone up enormously since 1800. We can also see in the bar chart that the number of city dwellers living in developed areas is predicted to flat out, whereas the urban population figures in developing regions is forecasted to moderate increase over the recorded period.
Turning into data, the line graph shows us the world’s population has been around 1000 million in 1800 and it has grown slightly to 2000 million in 1940. Although the period between 1950 and 2040 is expected to continue to rise from 2000 million to nearly 8000 million and reaches the highest rate by 2050 with more than 8000 million, but it is also estimated to decline to 6200 million by 2100.
According the bar chart shows the number of city inhabitants in developed regions is expected to level off in 1300 million from 2015 to 2040. Meanwhile, the population growth in developing regions has minimally increased from 2100 million to 4000 million in the next 25 years.
In summary, the world population growth happens unevenly, it continues to rise until 2050 and would be decreasing after that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, whereas, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91244239631 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47301046411 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7504807669 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15611210338 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799767201537 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453095848162 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970199373776 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474575391497 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.