The picture illustrates the way in which the power is generated using water. Overall, there are three stages. Beginning fromfevaroparation of sea water to delivery of power to houses etc.
Begin with, The water from the sea is evaropated due to effect of sun heat and they form into clouds. When the cloudes produce rainfall, The water is collected in reserviors linking with vdams and pumping pipes. To control flow of water, we use valve. Following with that, The valve is opened then water flows from reserviour to turbines which are the below the reserviour.
At the turbines, power is produced and water is sent back to reserviors. Here process is cyclic..
Following with that, power produced at turbines transform power to transformer stations using high volatge cables. The transformer responsibility to deliver power to the houses, schools, industry, etc.
The conclusion is the power is generated using machines and natural resources.
due to effect of sun heat
due to the effect of sun heat
To control flow of water,
To control the flow of water,
Sentence: Beginning fromfevaroparation of sea water to delivery of power to houses etc.
Error: fromfevaroparation Suggestion: from evaporation
Sentence: Begin with, The water from the sea is evaropated due to effect of sun heat and they form into clouds.
Error: evaropated Suggestion: evaporated
Sentence: When the cloudes produce rainfall, The water is collected in reserviors linking with vdams and pumping pipes.
Error: reserviors Suggestion: reservoirs
Error: cloudes Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: vdams Suggestion: dams
Sentence: Following with that, The valve is opened then water flows from reserviour to turbines which are the below the reserviour.
Error: reserviour Suggestion: reservoir
Sentence: At the turbines, power is produced and water is sent back to reserviors.
Error: reserviors Suggestion: reservoirs
Sentence: Following with that, power produced at turbines transform power to transformer stations using high volatge cables.
Error: volatge Suggestion: voltage
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