The map below show the village of Stoke ford in 1930 and in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the improvements of Stokeford village over the period between 1930 and 2010. The general overview here is that the east area of the village has changed more significant than the west area.
To specify, in the north east, the farmland has been gone to give place to several houses and a road in 2010. The primary school, which had only one block in 1930, has been extended to three buildings in 2010. Near the school, there was a garden with trees in 1930, which has been removed to give birth of a retirement home and many houses along the main road in 2010.
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