The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The picture shows the main changes which have taken place in Stokeford between 1930 and 2010, over a 70-year period. Overall, what stands out from the picture reveals that the most noticeable change is the replacement of farmland with several major residential areas which have changed considerably with the houses. Stokeford became much more modern city.
The majority of changing areas was houses from north to south and the development of construction was increase dramatically in 2005. The farmland has been replaced into the residential areas in the north. In the south, running along the street was the houses and farmland has been demolished and the area has been erected houses. Because of houses, several roads have been built in some areas.
A striking point is that the public facilities has been become reduced in 2005. A primary school has been extended into two blocks of school buildings and shops have been replaced by residence which has been expanded in the opposite road. At the center of Stokeford, the area has been converted a green area into dwellings. The next places, large houses have taken place retirement homes.
Stokeford became much more modern city.
Stokeford became a much more modern city.
the development of construction was increase dramatically in 2005
the development of construction was increased dramatically in 2005
running along the street was the houses and farmland has been demolished and the area has been erected houses.
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the public facilities has been become reduced in 2005
the public facilities have been become reduced in 2005
the area has been converted a green area into dwellings
a green area has been converted into dwellings
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