Marriage and Divorce Rate in USA

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Marriage and Divorce Rate in USA

The two charts show the different information about resident of USA. First chart informs about marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the second chart compares in the year 1970 and 2000 about material status of young people American.

Marriages become most popular in USA in 1970 and decrease every next year. While divorces have the fluctuative rate. The adult Americans have the most interest in married rather than never married or widowed and divorced. Married more impress them in 1970.

In 1970, 2.5 millions people in UAS got married, but much people also break their family by divorce for about 1 millions people at that time. In 2000 the interesting people for married is down by 0.5 millions, and divore in the same rate with 30 years before.

Most of adult in America finished their relation by getting married, it shows wheter in 1970 or 2000, it has the most great percentage, 70% in 1970 and less than 60% in 2000.

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Married more impress them in 1970.
Married impressed more them in 1970.

but much people also break their family
but many people also break their family

In 2000 the interesting people for married is down by 0.5 millions
In 2000 the interesting people for married are down by 0.5 millions ???

Sentence: While divorces have the fluctuative rate.
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Sentence: In 2000 the interesting people for married is down by 0.5 millions, and divore in the same rate with 30 years before.
Error: divore Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Most of adult in America finished their relation by getting married, it shows wheter in 1970 or 2000, it has the most great percentage, 70 in 1970 and less than 60 in 2000.
Error: wheter Suggestion: whether

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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 164 200
No. of Characters: 759 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.579 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.628 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.178 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.496 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.421 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4