Phone users among four countries in 2003

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Phone users among four countries in 2003

Talking about phone users in some developed country in the world, we can take some example in the chart above. According to the chart above two develop countries in Southeast asia which figure by Thailand and Philippines shows that mobile users in both countries are higher than landlines users. In Thailand, more than 15 millions mobile users and in Philippines is about 16 millions users. On the other hand, landlines users in those countries quite small members, in Thailand landlines users bigger than in Philippines in member of users.

Whe we talk about mobile and landlines users in Latin America like in Mexico and Paraguay which also its developing countries, mobile users in Mexico is very high in term of number, user mobile in Mexico twice of landlines users. In another country in latine America like Paraguay, mobile users is very small numbers. The table shows that number of mobile users not more than 2 millions users. Another data also shows that landlines users in Paraguay is very small in number.

We can conclude that in term of mobile and landlines users in developing countries. Nowadays mobile users are bigger than landlines and landlines users trend to decrease year to year while mobile users are increased.

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in some developed country
in some developed countries

we can take some example in the chart
we can take some examples in the chart

landlines users in those countries quite small members, in Thailand landlines users bigger than in Philippines in member of users.
landlines users in those countries have quite small members, in Thailand landlines users are bigger than in Philippines in member of users.

in Mexico and Paraguay which also its developing countries
in Mexico and Paraguay which also are developing countries

mobile users in Mexico is very high
mobile users in Mexico are very high

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