The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

The pie charts compare the information about revenue and expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA during a year. Overall, it can be clearly seen that total income is higher than total expenditure.

According to the first pie chart, it can be seen that a very large majority of donated food comprises the revenue sources, whereas in expenditures program services are a vast part of the second pie chart which is 95.8 %.

Excepted the donated food, the revenue sources have other types of income such as community contributions which make just over 10%. Then, there is also program revenue with a small fraction of total income, whilst investment income and government grants have the equal index (0,2%) and others do not have a significant percentage.

Pie chart presented the data about expenditure is divided into three parts: program services, fundraising and management and general charge. Compared to fundraising, management and general expenses are less for a per cent, which makes 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.

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