The pie chart shows the percentage of arrest person in five years ending in 1994.The bar graph shows the reasons for most recent arrest.Write a report making comparisons where relevant

The pie charts shows the amount in percentages, the number of people arrested according to their genders in five years ending 1994 and the bar charts illustrates the reasons why these people were arrested the most recently in percentages.

It is quite clear from the pie charts, that the number of the males arrested was higher than that of the females. Both accounting for 32% and 9% respectively.

Apropos to the information on the bar chart, the major cause of the recent arrest was public drinking. Here, the number of females exceed that of males. The females were about 37% while that of males was just above 30%. Following this, is the drink driving. The males have about double of females ( about 14%). The number of males arrested is bigger when compared with the females in breach of order, theft and other reasons while that of female is greater in assault and no answer.

All in all, males have higher number of arrest and also higher reasons for the most recent arrest.

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ending 1994
ending in 1994

and the bar charts illustrates the reasons
and the bar charts illustrate the reasons

The males have about double of females ( about 14%).
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