The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all resources and renewable in the year 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity which is generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewable per 560 billion kWh in 2009.
It is evident from the charts, electricity generation in Germany, the highest type was conventional thermal at around 59.6% due to the all type of resources, whereas the next higher generation in nuclear type at approximately 23%. According to the renewable, biomass and wind were far higher than others, at just around 39.3% and 36.9% respectively, but much less at 17.7% for hydroelectric and 6.1% for solar. There was no given data on geothermal in Germany by 2009.
In contrast. according to the all resources, nuclear was far exceeded compared to other two types which was just over 75% in France by 2009. In France, conventional thermal was the least type of generation at 10.3%, while renewable was nearly to 13.7%.Hydroelectric was the most important generation at 80.5%, whereas the biomass, wind and solar were less than 10% in renewable. In both countries they haven't generated on geothermal by 2009.
electricity generation in Germany, the highest type was conventional thermal at around 59.6%
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due to the all type of resources, whereas the next higher generation in nuclear type at approximately 23.
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'per 560 billion kWh in 2009.'
In France, it is 510 billion kWh in 2009.
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