Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of visits per day in the Amazon website over a period of one month, while the bar chart shows the types of traffic.
In the beginning of December, the number of daily visits was almost 1300. By December 18, this figure had fallen gradually to approximately 1100 before rising significantly to just below 4000 in December 20. This trend, however, plunged to 1100 in December 25. The period from the late December to the early January witnessed a fluctuation in the amount of visits, at between 1100 and 1200, and then it levelled off.
Regarding bar chart, while the organic web traffic was the largest types of traffic, at over three quarters, email was the lowest with just 0.27%. For other types of traffic, referral and direct web traffic accounted for 20.32% (4,436 visits) and 14.81% (3,234 visits) respectively.
Overall, the trend of daily visits in the Amazon website rises considerably in the mid December compared to others period of a month. Also, evidently the organic web traffic is the largest amongst other types of traffic.
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Sentence: Overall, the trend of daily visits in the Amazon website rises considerably in the mid December compared to others period of a month.
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