The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the proportion of variety categories of families living poverty that were divided in seven groups in Australia in 1999.
In each of these types, age couple was fewer amount of people lived in proverty than single aged person., single without children, couple with no children, sole parent, couple with children and all households. It is also noticeable that allhouseholds class had over 18.370 people living in privation.
For aged couple class and single aged person class had at four per cent and six per cent which stayed in the line of privation with number population less than 55.000 individuals. Then at 12 per cent in couple with family class with at 933.000 population and finding around more than 110.000 pairs poor economy that was equal population between single parent without children and having children when were combined.
The higest of population was all households at 1.837.000 population with at 11 per cent included poor people.
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Sentence: In each of these types, age couple was fewer amount of people lived in proverty than single aged person., single without children, couple with no children, sole parent, couple with children and all households.
Error: proverty Suggestion: property
Sentence: The higest of population was all households at 1.837.000 population with at 11 per cent included poor people.
Error: higest Suggestion: highest
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 796 1000
No. of Different Words: 88 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.038 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.405 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.825 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
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