the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The given two maps depict the condition of an island before and after the construction of some new tourist amenities.
To begin with, it is vivid that there are only few trees and one beach on the one side of the sea before adding new facilities on such place. After construction, we can see that there are some new habitations for accommodation. On the one side of sea, the new pier established for travellers and vehicle track built to go at reception as well as restaurant. The new homes also built with footpath on the right side of reception.
Furthermore, the two boats stand upon the sea water near to the pier. On the left side of the reception, a footpath established around the trees and it directly made a way between the beach and accommodation. On the far side of beach, the new services added after improvement for travellers, which is swimming.
Laconically, it is demonstrated that the island has totally changed after addition of some prominent facilities and now it has become a awesome place for tourism. However, the trees have on the same position at present which is really booming the beauty of an island.
the new pier established for travellers and vehicle track built to go at reception
the new pier is established for travellers and a vehicle track is built to go at reception
The new homes also built with footpath on the right side of reception.
The new homes also are built with footpath on the right side of reception.
a footpath established around the trees
a footpath was established around the trees
the new services added
the new services are added
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