Write a letter to a friend who stays in another country that you are planning to visit and say:
-‐ What you plan to see.
-‐ Ask for his/her opinion on where to stay.
-‐ Suggest some activities you can do together
My Dear Coco,
I am sorry I have not written for so long time.My work keeps me so busy that I never have a minute to myself in the past month. Luckily,the things all had been settled down and I give my self a break currently. I am planing to have a trip to New York,where you had invited me many time to your city.
I will be accompanied with my husband,Villkey, next Monday. As we plan to watch the NBA final match in New York's Stadium. We had brought tickets and will love if you can join us.
Since I don't want to bother you too much on our accommodation in your flat,It will be appreciated that you help to reserve a hotel for us, where is near your home.
Also,I suggest some activities that we can all take part in, besides watching match,such as, we have a one day trip to walk around the New York City. How is your suggestion? Think about it and drop me a line.
I will be waiting for your reply.
With Love,
Tracy
so long time.
so long a time.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.538 21.0
Don't put one sentence as one paragraph.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 189 200
No. of Characters: 713 1000
No. of Different Words: 121 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.708 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.772 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.043 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 28 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.248 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.231 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.714 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4