Write a letter to the local agency looking for an apartment the family to move to another city. In your letter you should includewhen and why movinghouse location requirementsand the requirements of the house

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Write a letter to the local agency looking for an apartment the family to move to another city. In your letter you should include
when and why moving
house location requirements
and the requirements of the house

Submitted by Kumar123 on Wed, 01/28/2015 - 19:30

Dear Sir/Madam,

I got your reference from a friend of mine who availed your services about an year back. I believe you cater to the East Kailash area and I am writing this letter to enquire about availability of an apartment in that locality.

I work in the State Lending bank and get transferred to a new branch every 3-4 years. This time I have been transferred to the Diamond District branch and I will be joining on the 20th of next month. I prefer to live close to my work location to save on travel time and I got to know that the East Kailash colony is close by and has all the ...

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