You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
• Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you need to take time off work.
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear James,
I am writing to request a few days off work during next month. My sister will be celebrating her wedding on 18th of December, which will take place in Southgate hall, in the presence of all family members and friends.
In order to attend for my sister’s wedding and also assist with all pre-arrangement, I would have to take time off work for three days beginning from the 17th of December. I have handed over all responsibilities over preparing audit committee documents and other formalities to Jane, who has happily accepted them. Although it would not be possible for me to ...
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I have handed over all responsibilities over preparing audit committee documents and other formalities to Jane
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