You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community, However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letterdescribe the work you have been doin

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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community, However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
describe the work you have been doing
explain why you can no longer do this work
recommend another person who is interest in the work

Dear Sir,

I am Imali Chathurika who have been working as a teacher in the Sunday school since 2009.

I am the section head of primary school and class teacher of grade 5 students. Furthermore I have been organizing all of the event such as debates, trips, district level games. It was a great opportunity to doing such a helpful work there as a voluntary worker.that was my happiest part in my life.

But, unfortunately I have to go abroad to my daughters' place permanently since she wants my help as she is about to having her first baby in next month. I have to leave the country in end of this month.

i know you will have a really trouble when i leave, but i can recommend my cousin for the vacancy as he is a experienced retired history teacher as well as he also likes to join with you to replace my gap.

I would like to thanks all your support during my work. It would be better you can reply before I am leaving the country.

Thanks,
Imali C.
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Your Sincerely

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 184 200
No. of Characters: 763 1000
No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.147 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.462 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.22 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.811 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4