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The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the most important reasons for migration to and from the UK in the year 2007.
At a first glance, it can be seen that the most important reason for both immigration and emigration was either to find a job or to definite a job, while other small proportions covered the rest of the reasons for migration to and from the UK.
A significant proportion of 30%, left the country to definite a job. Nearly to this number, 29% emigrated for the same reason. It can be noticed that, studies were another important reason to immigrate with a proportion of a little bit more than a quarter. In contrast to this, only 4% entered the country for study purposes that year.
Accompany/ join, counted only for 15% for immigrants and 13% for emigrants. A minority that stated no reason or gave another reason, counted for just under half procent of the people.
Sentence: A minority that stated no reason or gave another reason, counted for just under half procent of the people.
Error: procent Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 155 200
No. of Characters: 691 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.528 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.458 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.563 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.885 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.404 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4