airport visitors

Essay topics:

airport visitors

This diagram illustrates that in New York City from 1995 to 2000 many visitors arrived at the airport. Moreover, three names are given in the chart Johan F. Kennedy, Laguardia, newark.
To begin with Johan F. Kennedy in the year 1995 25 million tourists are visited. while laguardia airport visitor more came visited but, Newark airport people comparatively less other than airports. Talk to the next five years details from the diagram johan F. Kennedy on an average per year near about 35 million tourists visited while LaGuardia people are increased More than 65 million. newark has steadily increased.
To sum up, laguardia only one airport have people are maximum arrived , then johan F.kennedy is second position and third positions at Newark.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...r 1995 25 million tourists are visited. while laguardia airport visitor more came vis...
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Newark
...ple are increased More than 65 million. newark has steadily increased. To sum up, lag...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... airport have people are maximum arrived , then johan F.kennedy is second position...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, then, third, while, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 629.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15573770492 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40119718086 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696721311475 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2322151917 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222464104884 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753018664636 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132695583684 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155627580204 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505294819342 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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